Last week one of our young people took part in a story planning and creative writing lesson in school. He was given a picture as a stimulus for a piece of original creative writing and created a story plan. Then using his story plan, he typed his story out, he expressed that he really enjoyed the task. We think he did a fantastic job!
The west of the arctic, 10 explorers on a mission to unlock their savior to save their species from doom.
“Jeff” says Bob, “we found it.” The SECNATIO. “But we need the key” says the group. So, the explorers travelled miles until they found a strange hole in the ice, where bob pulled out THE KEY. With the whole worlds sake in their hands the explorer bob puts it in the forehead of the giant.
There was silence which was attacked with a loud boom. The secnatio says who thee dares awake thye self” and the explorers tell the icy savior about the melting ice caps and global warming. As the giant picked up the explorers and put them on his shoulders shouting “hold on to your hair.”
As the giant jumped into the clouds the explorers gazed in awe as the moon twinkled with the prepossessing stars which there were infinity universe. As they landed down, they were in Antarctica. They jumped into the water and the giant shouted back as he dipped his hand in the water, and it froze over. A set of icebergs formed, and a weird ship came on the side said Titanic, it crashed into the iceberg and over a few hours it sank.
The giant waved goodbye and jumped into the fluorescent night sky never to be seen again, bob calls out to the giant because a fiery red beast was lurking under the water, and it was burning through the ice. As the giant comes back, he uppercuts the fiery monstrosity into the air, but this red creature holds secnatio by his foot which melted it off, the giant screams arghhh arghhh “its stronger than me and only has one weakness, WATER.”
So, the icy beast summons a 30-ton load of water and blasts it on the giant fiery monster, and it disappeared into cloud smoke, the humans faint at this monstrous site. They wake in a gigantic mansion dizzy hot and blurry wondering where they are, a calming face appeared. It was the giant, it was their mystical friend the secnatio. There was water all over the floor and he had no legs, HE WAS DYING. As he was melting away, he rips his heart out and hands it over to Jeff and asks, “what does this do?” The secnatio says it saves meeeeee, vanishing into a puddle.
Bob was crying as he stepped outside and into the snow when it crumbled with a monstrous rumbling. A small ice man was growing in front of him, the icy savior said, “I knew you would revive me” and picked him up and hugged him. It was a happy ending with a happy aroma in the magical air that night.
The End.